contest writing draft and final copy

I see my writing contest copy. It's about a boy with a mental illness specifically schizophrenia taking care of his "sister" since his parents are never home.

I think I could've put more descriptive words rather than picturing words that you would use to describe mostly actions.

I wonder if I started working on it again, how would it end, would i be able to end it?

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totem drawing

I see the drawing of a butterfly i made that I thought represented me in a way. I think i could have done a bit better on the colouring and black streaks. I wonder why i chose a butter fly instead of my favourite animal at the time which was a turtle.

what is a portfolio?

A learning portfolio is something that holds experiences of learning and years of working others and sometimes alone. fun times and also boring but always learning more either in school or not.

Monix'learningportfolio

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